Jdg 4:23
A summary statement marks a decisive reversal: Jabin is “subdued” on that day, in the sight/presence of Israel. The focus is the public collapse of his dominance rather than tactical detail.
Jdg 4:24
The narrator describes an ongoing process: Israel’s “hand” (effective power) presses harder over time—“more and more”—until Jabin is “destroyed,” i.e., his capacity to rule is brought to an end. The repeated title “king of Canaan” keeps attention on the political regime being dismantled ().